Talk:Mafa Merlin/Cultivation/@comment-94.174.162.43-20200523174548

every fight is broken up by a huge paragraph explaining an account of another figure using that same move to do something over the top in the history of his previous life at the end of the world. an extremely repetative plot point is one charater being rude and arrogant to MC without witnessing his power then a 3rd party on good terms with both charactors has an internal monolog of how the first charater is digging his own grave for 3 paragraphs and then trys to give hints to the first charater to stop but first character missunderstands. This plot point repeats every 40 chapters and is complete boring and even whats said in the internal monologue is starting to be repetative on its own.